The wild is a peculiar place. You may hear stories of
animals fighting over a place to graze or the leftovers of an animal carcass. You
may hear stories of fights over dominance at the watering hole. You may even
hear stories of boys finding their ways into the jungles and being raised by
wolves or gorillas. But you probably do not hear many stories about herbivores
and carnivores defending each other and defying the laws of the land. This is a
story about my mother’s best friend who did just that.
When my mom was a little calf she became friends with a
tiger cub. As they grew older, my grandma told my mother it was best if she
strayed from this friendship and made friends of her own kind. My mother was
stubborn and appreciated the good friendship she had with the tiger. The two
remained friends throughout their adolescence and even into adulthood. They did
a lot of things together and had a very special bond. Every day they would go
to where the grass was the greenest so that my mother could eat the best grass
in the land. The tiger would protect my mother and scare off the other animals
who were trying to invade her space. When
my mother was finished, the tiger would leave to go feed on her own; grass was
not on the tiger’s list of desirable foods. The friends continued in this fashion
for many years together.
This is where I come into the story! Not much time had
passed when both my mom and the tiger became pregnant. The tiger cub, who I call
T, and me were born around the same time and my mom and the tiger agreed that they
would raise us together as friends.
The tiger was able to keep me and my mom
safe from predators during the night and in return my mom would keep the tiger
and her cub, my best friend, safe during the day so that the mama tiger could
bask in the sun. I had so much fun growing up with a tiger as my best friend! Tag
was our favorite game, although T seemed to win every time. We were happy and
did not think anything was unusual about our friendship. Unfortunately, the
other tigers in the area did not share these thoughts.
Apparently, the tigers living just outside the land we lived
in did not agree with my mom and Mrs. T’s friendship. They thought it was wrong
that they were such good friends and that my mother and I would make a great
meal that could feed the tigers for at least a week. Mrs. T tried to hold them
off for a long time, but their leader decided he no longer wanted to ignore our
unconventional friendship.
One day, my mother and I were grazing in our field and T and
her mom had gone to hunt. After a few minutes we could feel that something was
not right… It felt like someone was watching us. Turns out we were correct. The
tiger leader was staring straight at my mother and me and when we saw this we
took off running. The tiger leader started to chase us and we could sense that
he was really gaining on our tails. Then, out of nowhere Mrs. T pounced on the leader
tiger and took him down! She gave him a good beating and told him that if he
ever tried to harm us again, he would never return back to his tiger followers.
In return T and her mother agreed that they would no longer be welcome in the
eyes of the tigers. I was amazed that they had done this for us, but my mother reassured
me that friendship and love are much stronger than anything else in the world
and that I was incredibly lucky to have this unique and extraordinary family.
Authors note: The
original story is The Tiger Cub and the Calf, by Cecil Henry Bompas. In this story, the tiger and the
calf grow up together and have children. They are friends until one day the
tiger gets a taste of what the cow tastes like after drinking after her at the watering hole. The cow senses that she is going to be killed by the
tiger and tells her calf that she is about to die. After the tiger kills the
calf’s mother, the baby calf and the baby tiger decide to run away together and
are never to been seen from again. I was not a fan of the ending of this story,
so I decided to change it and make the tiger loyal to the cow and defend her in
times of trouble.
I liked your change in story. I also reminded me of the fox and the hound. I was nervous towards the end of your story that you were gonna kill off the cows. Which by the way I'm glad you didn't.my favorite though is the line you used at the end "friendship and love are much stronger than anything else in the world and that I was incredibly lucky to have this unique and extrodinary family" I felt like we learned thenleasson of the story right there. Very nice job! I really enjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteI love how you made this from the calf’s point of view! I think it was very interesting to read it from this perspective. It was kind of like the Lion King! The pictures you chose were SO cute and I loved looking at them! You really kept the story flowing and it was fun to see where you may take it next. Awesome job!
ReplyDeleteHi Lauren! Aw, this story was so cute. I loved how it was written in the perspective from the baby cow. I used to LOVE cows as a child, so this was really fun to read! I love how you incorporated a lesson at the end of the story, so it was easy to follow and stay entertained. Can't wait to read more!
ReplyDeleteI remember reading this story earlier this semester and not liking the ending either. Your version is much better. I liked that the tiger and cow were good friends, and that you decided to keep them loyal to each other. It was really nice to see that the mom tiger ends up attacking the tiger leader so that her friends would be safe!
ReplyDeleteThat was a nice revised ending. Myths just so often seem to turn out bad don't they? I think a pretty cool thing about rewriting them is that you can fix that what things go sour. It's kinda like disney-ifying things but who wants to read sad stories all the time honestly? The tone and voice were pretty good throughout all this although you might want to add in just a touch more descriptive language to really pull readers in. Although I liked it, reading things in the past tense keeps me just a bit distanced from the subject and I'd like to feel more in the story. Sometimes that's just a writing style people choose though and yours still works. I don't want to be too critical though cause I really did think the story was good as it is!
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