Have you ever looked at a woodpecker before? I mean really
looked at one. They’re pretty intriguing if you ask me. They have beautiful red
heads and white bodies. Their backs and wings have black splotches or stripes,
making each one unique and special in its own way. Each one really does look so
different and distinguished from the next, but one thing they all have in
common is their stubby tail. It really doesn’t match the rest of their stylish
look. Would you be surprised if I told you that long ago they used to have a
brilliantly long, embellished tail? Well, sit back and relax because I am going
to tell you exactly how this transformation occurred.
Once, long ago, in the plains of Texas, there was a very
large pond surrounded by tons of grasslands and trees. About every ten years a
heavy, long-lasting rain would come through and flood the lands, wiping out
everything in its path. For the animals living on the ground, this was a big
issue. They had to prepare for these floods and plan their course of action
before the rains occurred. The animals living in the waters on the other hand were
much better off, excited even, when they heard a heavy rain was coming. This meant
a replenished water source and no Indians out potentially catching them on a
hook to eat for dinner. It had been a long while since the last major storm had
blown through. So all the animals knew it would only be a matter of weeks.
One day, a frog came
hopping and splashing through the waters in a panic telling all the animals that a flood
was a-coming and that everyone should run for their lives. All of the fish
gathered together, looked up, and watched as all of the land animals scrambled
to find their families and get to higher ground. As the fish were watching they
turned to each other in excitement and imagined all of the new water coming
their way. Knowing how rough the waters could be during these storms, they
decided to all try and stick together and protect one another until the winds
calmed down. It’s not fun in the slightest to get knocked to and fro up against
the side of the pond during these storms. Each fish grabbed a buddy to make
sure they were always together and they all huddled close as they watched the
sky turn from bright blue to green and finally to black.
There was one small fish that could not find a buddy! He was
the only young fish without any siblings and he could not find his parents. He was
very much a loner and did not have any close friends so he just decided to
stick very close to the large pack and crossed his fins that he would be okay. When
the storm first started it really wasn’t too bad. The waters swayed, but it wasn’t
anything too rough to handle. As the hours dragged on, though, the pack was
really getting tossed around. The winds were savage and not letting up at all.
At one point the little fish could not take it anymore and
tried to swim deeper into the water, hoping this would help get him farther
from the rough waters. As soon as he broke away he was swept into a current and
tossed up towards the surface of the water and thrown against the edge of the
pond. The little fish had no idea what to do and had never experienced such
rough waters. He looked around for something, anything, for him to grab and
anchor himself onto. Surprisingly, he saw something just above his head, but he
couldn’t tell exactly what it was. It was definitely not seaweed or moss, but
it was something for him to hold on to so he went for it. He shot himself upward
and grabbed onto the mysterious item. It was a soft and a bit slippery, but if he could just hold on for a little bit he would be okay. He immediately felt a strong tug, which caused him to bite down tighter. When he did this, he went spiraling though the water spitting out the soft, slippery item as he tumbled through the water.
This right here is exactly how the woodpecker lost its tail.
This bird had decided not to hop high into the trees like the others and when
the waters rose, a little fish tried to grab onto his tail dangling in the water
to steady himself. Had he been smarter and hopped higher into the trees, he
would not have been so close to the water and the fish would not have been able to bite off his tail. Now don’t worry, the little fish ended up fine and his parents found
him just after this little incident. The woodpecker, on the other hand, was
extremely sad for his loss and decided for the rest of time, he would peck as
loud and as hard as possible and do his best to annoy every fish nearby.
Author's Note: This story is originally from a Tejas Indian legend. As the name
suggests, the story takes place in Texas and gives a great description of the
different natural aspects that the state has. The story is called The Woodpecker's
Stumpy Tail and it was written by Florence Stratton. The
original story is from the woodpecker's point of view and tells how his tail
got to be so short and stumpy. Like my story, there is a flood coming and all
of the animals have been warned. One woodpecker does not take this warning
seriously and decides not to take precautions. He regrets this when he cannot
climb higher than the flooding waters and a fish takes a bite out of his tail.
My story is from the fish's point of view, but has the same story line. I
thought it would be interesting to give the fish a background story since he
sounds like the bad guy in the original story. I also wanted to tell it from
this point of view to show the importance of perspective. Originally it sounds
like the fish is the bad guy for biting off the woodpecker’s tail. In my story
you can see that the fish was simply trying to survive the harsh storm. I chose
this specific image because when I originally read this story I was not exactly
sure what a woodpecker looked like. Of course, I have seen them before, but I could
not remember all of the details. I thought it was important for readers to see
a good picture of their beautiful bodies and stumpy tails in order to get the
full effect of the story. I added this story to my portfolio because it
includes a story about animals I have not used yet in my other stories.
Bibliography: The Woodpeckers Stumpy Tail by Florence Stratton
Bibliography: The Woodpeckers Stumpy Tail by Florence Stratton
Lauren,
ReplyDeleteYour storytelling is very descriptive and creative. I think the inclusion of an expansive backstory and in-depth set up forces the reader to emotionally invest in the characters' experiences. The introduction sets up the story perfectly, and it really piqued my interest. I have never read the original story, The Woodpecker's Stumpy Tail, but I like that your version of the story is from the fish's point of view. I would have never guessed that he is portrayed as the antagonist in the original story. I was a bit confused at first as to why it was a story about woodpeckers from a fish's point of view, but your Author's Note did a great job of clearing that up. This story makes me sympathize with the woodpecker. Now anytime I see or hear one, I will understand that he is just upset about losing his tail. I love the image you chose, as well. It really shows how beautiful these woodpeckers are! Excellent work overall, and I look forward to reading more of your stories!
Thorpe
This is an interesting explanation of the woodpecker’s tail. The story left you with suspense the entire time until the end. You know the story is about how the woodpecker loses his tail, but the story focuses on fish and a flood. I did not see the story ending like that which was nice.
ReplyDeleteWow Lauren!! You are such an interesting writer (:
ReplyDeleteThis is a very intense story and it is actually kind of sad. Why did you make it so that he lost his tail?!
The point of view that it is told from is great! I look forward to reading more of your work in the future!
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ReplyDeleteI really liked how you set up this story by describing the beauty of woodpeckers, I think it adds a nice setting for the rest of the story. You were also successful in writing the fish’s backstory and making the reader feel sympathetic for it! I have never read the original story but your additions seem really great! I’m glad the fish is happy in the end, and I thought it was funny that the woodpecker just wanted to annoy all the fish from there on out.
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